17 A Elevator pitch No. 2

I was actually quite happy with the feedback I received from the first video. I felt that the overall acceptance to the video was positive, and that I was able to pass the messaged that I wanted to. One of the things I received a lot was that I needed to work on the hook, I still think I need to improve on that aspect, however, the second aspect I felt I needed to work on which is read less from a script I am confident that I overcame that.
Thank you all for the feedback.


https://youtu.be/FayA9rblLlQ

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